i wrote this poem, and it's dedicated to a very special person in my heart. it's not so good, but it describes how i feel. ^^
if your legs lose their strength, i'll carry you. if your eyes lose their light, i'll describe the world to you. if your hands lose their touch, i'll feel for you. if you feel sad, i'll make you happy and smile. if you feel lonely, i'll comfort you forever. if you feel hated, i'll take your pain away. if you feel unwanted, i'll hug you and be there for you. if you ever cried, i'll wipe your tears. if you ever got hurt, i'll never leave your side. if you ever trembled, i'll hold your hand. if you ever felt cold, i'll keep you warm. if you huged me, i'll never let you go. if you held my hand, i'll wish for that moment to last a life time..... because i want to be with you, to always be with you. your my happiness, and forever will be my smile! ^^.........aishiteru! |
ocean sky : that's one of my best poems so far!!
ocean sky : Lylas dark mousey ^.^
DarkMousey : awww this is a sweet poem LYLAS
ocean sky : Heh, i think he's lucky, i'll let him judge on that! XP
Deko Wolf : Heh ^^ you have a bf? good for you, he's one lucky guy for having a gf like you ^-^
ocean sky : Thank you styx ^-^
StyX : wow. It might just be my mood today. But i really liked this poem, well written ocean :)
ocean sky : Get a grab of urself rukia :P.......it is for a special person, my bf ^.^ and don't bother asking who, cuz i ain't spilling my beans! All i can say he's my heart and soul! ^^
Bleachboy12 : thats sweet
Deko Wolf : hahaha! ^^
I wounder...who that person could be *rolleyes* ...
Rukia15 : Sis, this is a beautiful poem. I know excatly who it was written for..but i am not saying without Sarah's permission. I could never write something like this without tearing up * sniffles* aww i wish i could feel like that to someone.. lylas sis ^^
heavensfire2 : is that special perosn me? >.< jk awsome! its so cute.
Deko Wolf : awww!
So that's so sweet of you girl! ^^
I love it, and I'm sure the person you made it for, loves it too ;) >.^